VeeshanVault

We've been together for about 6 months, and we're doing a bunch of local shows. This is one of the first songs we wrote, and we recorded it a few weeks ago. The vocals are off in a few spots because my original drum part was off time, and when i re-recorded my drum part, the vocals werent changed.

Just some constructive critisim and commentary please

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